My Second pitch.
This is my second pitch for my magaizne. After I got some feedback from my peers about my first pitch, I tried to make improvements on my second by using better body language and improving eye contact and speaking clearly.
I think I got the message about my magazine and target audience across by explaining why my magazine is different and better than the ones already out.
The unique thing about my magaine concept is it has free helplines. It would also stand out from other similer magazines by being cheaper and loads of free gifts when they go online with the unique code that came in the magazine when the brought it.
I felt very postive after presenting My second. Two particular things I felt pleased about were speaking more clearly and having better eye contact. Two things I think I could probably changed next time would be better eye contact and try to explain my ideas in more detail.
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